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It's not just the tone but the actual voice of this chapter seems off to me. I wish I had the skill to elaborate more on why I feel that way - I'm not as eloquent as Matt. However, I didn't enjoy it half as much as I have enjoyed every single previous chapter. Not writing to be a dick, but I'm wondering is it just me? Still just as excited as ever for the next installment.
Im Canadian and there is no border crossing in Toronto and I really cant see why someone would drive from Vancouver to Toronto.Its like a three day drive and theres dozens of border crossings along the prarie...
There's a typo in this chapter, where two paragraphs repeat:
"For our grow-op, it took a minimum of ten weeks between harvests. When the grow wasn’t on, we focused more on selling Kermit’s weed. Which was fine, until I started to have problems at the border.
But when the grow op wasn’t on, we focused more on selling Kermit’s weed. Which was fine, until I started to have problems crossing the border."
It's not just the tone but the actual voice of this chapter seems off to me. I wish I had the skill to elaborate more on why I feel that way - I'm not as eloquent as Matt. However, I didn't enjoy it half as much as I have enjoyed every single previous chapter. Not writing to be a dick, but I'm wondering is it just me? Still just as excited as ever for the next installment.
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Im Canadian and there is no border crossing in Toronto and I really cant see why someone would drive from Vancouver to Toronto.Its like a three day drive and theres dozens of border crossings along the prarie...
Matt & Anon - We’re really enjoying this novel! I read it to my dyslexic friend at 4:20 every Tuesday. Cheers!
There's a typo in this chapter, where two paragraphs repeat:
"For our grow-op, it took a minimum of ten weeks between harvests. When the grow wasn’t on, we focused more on selling Kermit’s weed. Which was fine, until I started to have problems at the border.
But when the grow op wasn’t on, we focused more on selling Kermit’s weed. Which was fine, until I started to have problems crossing the border."